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In Writing Task #1, you will:
1. Read a Passage in 3 minutes & take notes
2. Listen to a Lecture & take notes
3. Write an essay in 20 minutes that summarizes how the points in the lecture contrast with the points made in the reading
Present a concise two-sentence intro that contrasts the reading and lecture about cats. Then present paired points that align each reading point with the lecture, highlighting cleanliness, cuteness, and independence.
Use transition words to move between ideas and paragraphs, start each supporting paragraph with first, next, or finally, and link reading to the lecture with however or in contrast.
Now, let's put what you've learned all together. You know the verbs CIAASP and you know your transition words. Let's sing a song to help you memorize these words along with your introduction.
Explore a reading example aligned with the TOFEL test, explaining Valentine's Day origins and its modern love-centered meaning, and how it strengthens bonds through cards, gifts, and shared moments.
Identify the three main points that Valentine’s Day offers positive benefits: appreciation for a lover, family and friends celebrations, and gifts such as flowers, jewelry, and dark chocolate.
Allocate two to three minutes at the end to review your essay, fix mistakes and grammar, and review common grammar points that appear in writing task one.
Learn to correctly use present-tense verbs (claims, insists, asserts, argues, states, points out) in your writing, and ensure the intro contrasts what the reading says with what the lecture disagrees.
Master proper comma use after transition words by following with a comma in phrases like however, in contrast, and on the other hand.
Master how to avoid run-on sentences in TOEFL writing task 1 by using periods to break up ideas and craft clear, well-structured sentences.
Master how to use a, the, or no article in TOEFL writing task 1 by distinguishing general vs specific nouns and consistently referring to the reading or the lecture.
Discover how to identify what the question asks for in writing task 1, using terms like oppose, contrast, counter, and cast doubt to explain how reading points oppose the lecture.
Follow a summary of the reading rather than your own opinion; the test will never ask for personal views. Keep opinions out of your writing.
Learn strategies for handling missing lecture points on the TOEFL writing task: aim to match points when possible, or summarize the reading to produce a usable score.
Focus on including many details from the reading and the lecture. Avoid stressing word count; target two reading sentences and three to four lecture sentences for a high-scoring essay.
Identify the subject, verb, and object, then paraphrase with alternative words or a different order while preserving meaning; use fewer than four original words to avoid zero points.
Enhance your TOEFL writing by using a variety of words to show fluency. Replace common terms like 'good' and 'bad' with precise alternatives such as positive or harmful.
Master grammar for writing task 1 by using CIA ESP verbs to introduce independent clauses, ensure complete sentences, and correctly use past and present tense when summarizing events.
Apply everything you’ve learned about writing task one by analyzing ten sentences, identifying at least one mistake in each, and correcting them together with guided feedback.
Review sentence number one to identify the mistake, then learn why a service needs an s, and that the reading asserts you must add an s to verbs.
Identify the two mistakes in sentence two and explore how the reading and lecture discuss Valentine's Day, with guidance on using an article before reading and a discussion after.
Identify three sentence mistakes, focusing on punctuation and comma usage, and confirm correct spelling from the reading, such as the proper form of 'Valentine's Day'.
Learn to turn incomplete sentences into complete ones by adding an independent clause, and explore societal pressures to be in a relationship and images and romantic movies on Valentine's Day.
Learn how to turn a fragment into a complete sentence by adding a clause; explore how single people's envy escalates on Valentine's Day as couples hold hands and stare lovingly.
Practice avoiding opinion in task 1 essays, use a comma after next, and end the sentence after family and friends to accurately summarize the reading and lecture.
Identify and fix a common article mistake, emphasizing the right use of 'a', 'an', and 'the' before a noun, as highlighted in sentence #10.
Review essential punctuation for TOEFL writing task 1, including comma placement, periods after complete sentences, and avoiding run-on errors to prevent common mistakes.
Critiques volcanism as the sole cause of dinosaur extinction; cites insufficient Decken eruptions and asteroid impact evidence, including sudden mass killing in North Dakota and iridium tied to the impact.
Whole wheat health depends on soil, farming, and processing, challenging claims of nutrient richness. Modern high-yield wheat may be nutrient-depleted, spike blood sugar, and involve gluten-related inflammation.
Examines the benefits of 5G for health care, transportation, and energy efficiency, and analyzes environmental risks to insects, rural connectivity gaps, hacking threats, and the need for safety research.
Explore mindfulness and meditation as practices that help reduce alcohol craving and relapse, ease depression and anxiety, and support mindful eating for weight loss when combined with diet and exercise.
Explore how circle symbolism venerates the feminine through womb caves, mountains, pyramids, and ancient temples, revealing fertility rites, rebirth, and feminine sacred spaces across civilizations.
Writing for the TOEFL requires a plan
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In this course you will learn:
• What to expect on the TOEFL Writing Task #1
• How to structure and organize your essay
• Proper sentence construction
• An easy to follow template for Writing Task #1
• How to avoid common grammar mistakes
• How to summarize and paraphrase points from a reading and lecture
Additional Learning Materials Include:
6 Example Essays with an Oppositional Relationship
1 Example Essay with a Problem/Solution Relationship
1 Example Essay with a Lecture that Supports the Reading
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